All Comments on 'Princess Trina'

I hope there's more to come!

Was a good story overall, debated giving it a 75, but the story itself was worth the 100. One thing to keep in mind is the tempo of your writing. The beginning was nice and evenly paced, then it seems as though you rushed, and tried to finish it in a hurry. Submission is a gift that takes time, it is not instant, nor is it a fast breakdown (there are exceptions to this rule) but for the most part, it takes trust to surrender. Trust of course only comes with time.

I look forward to seeing how your stories improve.

Liked the idea and the storyline. Characters are good. It must be difficult to write from a sub view as everything is such a whirlwind that first time. Nice!