All Comments on 'Princess's Story'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
I really liked this!

I see that there are no comments on this story. I wonder why because I really enjoyed this chapter. Wish you would write more.

GrantLeeStoneGrantLeeStonealmost 9 years ago
I liked this but...

The sex was pretty hot. And the relationship between the King, Queen, and Panda is worth exploring. But there really wasn't much in the way of a "Fantasy" setting. Maybe you could add a magical or mythical element to Chapter 2. Also, the story needs conflict.

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