All Comments on 'Princil's Art'

Would have rated higher but too short.

Thanks Anonymous. This piece is a prequel to the Chapter 2 Part 2 section of Princil's Magic, where Princil does indeed get to 'satisfy' his attraction towards his fullsister Remzain in order to create the magic of protection from the invaders. They have, until that moment, a mutual fascination towards each other. Some of the earlier combinations with other 'family' members are shown in more detail in Princil's Magic Ch.1 and Ch.2.

You do need to make the chapter's longer than just one page. Other than that this is a story that could have great potential. It just depends on how you make it progress that depends on how it turns out.