by curtainsup1
I don't normally do feedback. But God damn this is hot as hell. Don't leave me hanging. Can't wait to read more.
It's great to have you writing again. I hope you continue your werewolf story.
this story sucks so much, stop writing, no good naration, sloppy characters and just no storyline, even for porn this is bad
As girl, I don't usually read gay porn but oh my lord, this was soo hot I couldn't resist. Perfect characters!~ Thank you thank you for writing this!~
Make another part please....idea: have other cell mates during lunch or something take turns on him :)
Hot stuff... I really like the young, cute originally straight stuff getting turned into a prison bitch. Feminization would make it perfect.
I really don't see these people's issue with your writing. Stylistically, you're great. Content wise, A++. Characters? Solid. Keep on going, mate. You're firing on all cylinders and honestly I think the hate you're getting is based on people getting butthurt over personal differences than treating your work fairly. Don't let them get to you; giving controlling assholes control is the worst thing you can do for them. 10/10 looking forward to opening up c4.
iconic scenario, excellent writing. however, it's conspicuously missing ass to mouth [or baton to mouth in this chapter].