by Miss Dyyna
a good story, too bad it was not a little longer, but still in all a good story
It would like another chapter and a bit longer, to learn more about the two girls and perhaps thier names. I did enjoy It though, nicely written.
I never understood who was talking when. The characters were unclear to me, especially when the cock popped up.
i had to read it twice, and it didn't get better.
I enjoyed it! I love when I find out my date is packing. I look forward to reading more of your stories.
baby