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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Keep trying......

Was semi-believable until Mr 21 inches arrived on the scene - what was he? - a baby elephant?? Make it more real and believable and then you will get more positive feedback. Have read some of your other stories and they were far better. Don't give up though.

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I love to read romance novels and erotica. This fuelled my passion for writing at the age of 14. I write based on fantasies I have/dream of and certain things I've experienced. I have no formal training or courses in writing so I may not be as good as professionals. It's merel...