Prison of Pleasures

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"Access to all this equipment" rolled over and over in my head. Still dazed I looked at him as he turned my face to him. Staring into my eyes he kissed me. Still speechless he breathed onto my lips, I gulped hard

"Where shall we begin Vivica?"

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Keep trying......

Was semi-believable until Mr 21 inches arrived on the scene - what was he? - a baby elephant?? Make it more real and believable and then you will get more positive feedback. Have read some of your other stories and they were far better. Don't give up though.

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