by GayTripper
The blair crap ruined the story. Roxie would have beaten up Blair to reassert her authority and be pissed at Blair for going too far. All the shit stuff is gross. First couple chapters were good, wished u hadnt changed the story so much and made it gross.
I agree with the previous comment. It was a good story before Blair and the shit play.
And Roxie would totally beat Blair's ass after how she shaved Erica's head.
right up to the point of Blair crapping in Erica's mouth. I'm not into scat. Hope you are able to work around this section.
I would love Roxie kicking Blair's ass in the concluding chapter.
Also the tranny and shit ruined the story.
I appreciate what you've written so far. I look forward to see how this story ends.
I really want Erica to end up with Roxie. Blair treats her like shit... I didn't enjoy the scat or piss but I have enjoyed the whole story. I've been rubbing my little pussy and wishing I had another female to experiment with.
I loved every part of it, the fact that some parts are not what most people customarily like make the whole story so much better! I'm eager to see who Erica ends up with, either can be very interesting, you're an amazing writer!