All Comments on 'Prisoners In Control'

be gassed--accompanied by those who write and those who consider this to be EROTIC

No corrections officer would ever be that stupid.

The content was good, but the events needed to more detailed. It was too short. Great job.

the warden doesn't decide "it's nice out so you can have lunch outside today". prisons are built on strict routine. everything happens at the same time every day. female guards at male prisons, if they exist, are incredibly rare, and no guard is ever left alone with even one prisoner. prisoners are never out of sight of a guard. if a prisoner ever has any physical contact with a guard that's not initiated by the guard, they end up with broken bones. fantasy is one thing but basically, nothing in this story could or would ever happen the way you wrote it.