All Comments on 'Private Dancer'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great story

This is an absolute great story. I loved it

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
First GOOD story I've read here.

I really appreciate this, because it's more than just the usual vulgarity and sex. You have a very distinct writing style and you capture the character's little quirks and personalities very well. Kudos to you, my friend, for writing something that stands above the usual trash.

denniscleedenniscleealmost 17 years ago
Nice guys finish best..

Usually I take the sadists POV and root for him, but you made a convincing case for the 'nice' guy (even though he was a bit of a wimp), without sacrificing the degree of eroticism. Very good storytelling.

frenchdame92frenchdame92over 16 years ago
Outstanding

This story was very well written, and I appreciate your writing style. I am glad to have found quality work here, as opposed to the usual, plain and unadorned sex. Nicely done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Truly Quality Work

Flawlessly delivered, great thesaurus work, continuously built to the climax, filled with more than one unsuspected twist.

Not just "A" material, "A+"!

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Walking the earth, having adventures and shit. Not looking for any hook-ups, I just want to get me stories out there and have a chat on the forums.