by geronimo_appleby
I really appreciate this, because it's more than just the usual vulgarity and sex. You have a very distinct writing style and you capture the character's little quirks and personalities very well. Kudos to you, my friend, for writing something that stands above the usual trash.
Usually I take the sadists POV and root for him, but you made a convincing case for the 'nice' guy (even though he was a bit of a wimp), without sacrificing the degree of eroticism. Very good storytelling.
This story was very well written, and I appreciate your writing style. I am glad to have found quality work here, as opposed to the usual, plain and unadorned sex. Nicely done.
Flawlessly delivered, great thesaurus work, continuously built to the climax, filled with more than one unsuspected twist.
Not just "A" material, "A+"!