All Comments on 'Private Dancer'

Maybe there's a story in there but who can tell? The writing is so sloppy, e.g., bad spelling or typos, lack of punctuation, mixed tenses, confusion between 1st person and 3rd person, words left out, etc, etc. It almost reads like a bad translation done by a 4th grader.

If you can't read your own story after you've finished and fix the obvious errors, then get yourself an editor!! Otherwise leave out the dirty words and send your story to THE WEEKLY READER!!!

I have read you comments and find consideable value in what you have written. With that said, being anonymose tends to weaken it. Oh and the insults.. well I will take that them for what they are worth and NOTHING more.

Although this story is full of typos, I enjoyed the idea and found it verrrrrrrrrry sexy. Maybe I'll ask my wife to do this for me! I hope you write more stories. But check them better for grammar first. Thanks!