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Click hereShe'd tied Papa Pawnbroker to a chunk of pavement because, aside from being efficacious, it looked like Mob work. The coppers bought it. She'd hired me to keep up appearances: where oh where had dear daddy gone? Didn't matter to me. Twisted old son of a bitch had it coming, for my money. So many guys have no idea what a woman will do once her back is up.
Now her back was up against my office wall, her long legs wrapped around my hips, her expensive wool suit missing in action, and my prick ramming up inside her. I was chuckling at the idea of the accountant next door hearing the thumping and screams as she stiffened and gasped, then shuddered and began to squirm on my shaft, grinding her hips and pulling me deeper into her with her legs. She quivered and slurped at my tongue as I shot my hot load into her. I could hear the rain letting up.
"Baby, you're good," I said. "You're very good."
But I was still going to send her a bill.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 7 years agoTouch all the bases with this little gem of a story. "...very Stanley Kowalski." "Don't know him..." That line made me laugh out loud! Bravo! Now to read the rest of your stuff. Carry on!
Anonymousover 7 years agoAs a Tribute to the Genre.
Every year there are fewer of us, who remember the yarns spun on the rough paper known as "Pulp".
Detective mags...read my first in a Bus Station, waiting for my eldest Brother to ship out to San Diego for US Navy Boot Camp.
Keep at It. Writing is like an Itch; Ya Just Gotta Scratch It.
PileDriver48over 7 years agoBut you still managed a fun story that was a fun fast read. I enjoyed the whole idea and am thinking about hanging out a Private Investigator sign myself.
rexbrookdaleover 7 years agoGood story! Engaging. Please write more!
spidercow2over 7 years agoAuthorI noted your comment, with its vague reference to unspecified "mistakes," about how my story sucks, so I figured I'd better check out your submissions to see how to do it properly. Imagine my surprise to find you haven't submitted jack squat.
Troll.
