All Comments on 'Private Game'

by CruelLines

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AsjoAsjoalmost 8 years ago
The story leaves you wondering ...

I came across this story while looking for non-consensual pet play stories. The elegant writing envelops the "nubian princess" in mystery and somehow juxtaposes her with the loving and playful lesbian couple, who are lost in each other. As such, based on their reaction, I found that they considered the other woman to be shady and had observed that Fifi was not in her role of her own volition. So, I read the story very carefully to see if I had missed a detail of some kind. It seems I didn't, but my mind is still exploring the possibilities ...

CliterateDykeCliterateDykeover 7 years ago

I keep hoping for more of this story, but alas, it seems not to be. I love the two stories you've submitted, and I miss your intelligent and sensuous erotica. There are too many writers of impoverished abilities on here, not enough writers who are gifted and smart. You are missed my friend. Hope you are well.

Bridget69Bridget69about 6 years ago
Doing it doggy style!

Interesting contrast between two couples who basically incorporate the same kind of role play in their relationship.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
More Please

Loved the story

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