All Comments on 'Private Lessons'

Great story!

AutumnWriter:

A most sensuous and erotic story and so well told. Congratulations and Thank You. Ronnie W.

I have enjoyed very much both of your stories posted today. This is a vivid and so complete an erotic, hot, romance. Damn, I would have loved to have one more of their sex scenes at the end. You write so very well and I hope many others get a chance to read your stories. You cover every detail so well.

With great Respect

Peggytwitty

Excellent tale, very descriptive and kept you going until the end! can't wait to read more!

The most loving story that I have read yet.

I look for and prefer stories that embody 'loving kindness'. It seems to me that it is the polar opposite of 'non-consent/reluctance' which generally saddens me. Your story of erotic loving kindness is amoung the very best I have read. The sizziling hot erotic thread that builds and maintains throughout left me thinking that your story is wonderful on so many levels.

Autumwriter writes a beautiful romantic tale. The scenes are erotic and detailed. A writer well worth reading.

Thanks for your efforts

What can I say! So hot, so sensuous, so arousing, sex at its best. You need not change a thing - it is perfect as it stands AutumnWriter! Every young man should be blessed with a Sylvia to guide them on their path to maturity

This lady whomever she may be in real life is a great writer,and in my humble opinion should expound her writings into non sexual short stories for possible publications.She has class, imagery, sexuality,reality,all the qualities of a good writer.

Why didn't I meet a Sylvia, when I was 20? Such a lovely story.

Very touchy and lovely story

It was a pleasure to read your story. Every young man should have the opportunity to experience sex for the first time in the way you describe. It would have made a great difference in how I approached sex and love.

A Story/tale written from the heart, and imparting such feelings , that you cannot stop reading it. Yes full of excitment, passion ; but most of all LOVE.

I THINK THIS IS THE MOST MOVING STORY I HAVE EVER PUT EYE TO. IT GRIPS YOU AND WILL NOT LET YOU GO TILL YOU HAVE CONSUMED THE TENDER LOVING AFFAIR THAT TWO PEOPLE COULD EVER CONSIVE. THERE IS SO MUCH MORE TO BE SAID ABOUT THIS STORY BUT I DONT HAVE THE WHERE FOR TO PUT IT DOWN ON PAPER OR ANYTHING ELSE. BROVO TO YOU. JUST SMASHING!!!!!!

Very touching, stimulating story of the highest calibre, my compliments to the author

Not enough character development and action. This story took forever getting in and the pay off was lack luster.

I love the measured pace, the delicate descriptions, the slow but building sensuality, the sweet lovemaking. This was a wonderful read. It was happy and sad. It was real! Excellent!

This was one of the best. A real piece of art. Made me want to fall in love again. I loved it.

Thank You for writing it.

Chuck

I am quite taken with mF tales. This story could and should stand as a model of how to write truly exceptional erotica. Thank you. I hope you get to read this. It would be a privilege to read some of your non LT work as well. Best regards, Kal

This is the sort of story which should grab any young man and drag him into the adventure, very well done.

I truly loved it. It was well written and extremely erotic. It (thankfully) lacked the rude sex so many so called erotic stories have. I much rather prefer the hints of eroticism you displayed in this story. Please keep writing them like this

She calls him "lover" and he was her lover, as she clearly loved him. Their tenderness for each other hinting at something truly mysterious about Sylvia that slowly and silently endears the reader to find her very real charm, her heart. It has been a long time since I have had the pleasure of reading Autumnwriter and yet, his easy, paced, fulfilling style never bores, but makes one truly enjoy the reading as if the story is a revelation. I can honestly say I enjoy these gems as I do scant few others here. My gratitude for the work will probably always remain for this author.

So that I may add my thanks and hearty well done to the many kudos you've already generated. A grand and gentle fantasy (but is it?) told with a sure and consistent hand that easily controls the narrative. Joins the rare and scant population of the truly gifted authors who may be mined out of the dross here on LIT. Best wishes for 2019 if you're still above the green, otherwise RIP. Kal

The details of her tasting him were incredible. My only wish is there had been such exquisite details in him tasting her and expounded details of their first union together.

Beautiful writing. Thanks

Beautiful!!! I am so happy that I discovered your incredible writings today. Thank you for sharing this!

Surely every young man's dream, and mine as I end my 7th decade.

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