All Comments on 'Probing a Spy'

Loved it! I find many authors in this category fall into the usual pitfalls when it comes to sci-fi, but yours is excellent. Look forward to more!

B2Lips

Good story, nicely told though I feel something is missing, need more background on why M & F live seperately. Is there a third part that reveals the whole?

Considering English is not your first language I thought you handled the narrative excellently, only slight stumbles on 'colloquial' type dialogue.

"Probing a Spy" is a great title!

Will's

Also I could find any of the characters sympathetic.