All Comments on 'Problem with a One Night Stand Ch. 01'

I like the way you write character, dialogue, sex, and situations generally.

Couple of things, though:

Did they have sex in the shower without a condom?

You might have pushed the envelope too much with their meeting up again at Yale:

Wouldn't they have told each other where they were going to school?

If they took selfies in Josh's bedroom, would they not have exchanged phone numbers?

I know, allowing Josh to contact Andrew or Andrew expecting to see Josh on campus would have waylaid all that paranoia and conflict you love to write, lol.

But it would have been more believable. You're a better writer than that.

And I suspect some readers will lambast you for not going into the situation with Jason more. You did gloss over it fairly easily.

Keep up the good work!

Please don't let this be the end! These two are meant to be together at least one more hot time!

Can't wait for the next chapter

Omg, love the new series so far! Hope josh finds someone to finally love and who loves him back the same way. Please hurry w/the next addition!

Hot first chapter! Pleasantly surprised to see the return of familiar characters and excited to see how this story evolves.

But i do love it...i have been writing my first story so i know its sometime hard to put things as we want to.well good luck on the next part surely hooked up ..;)

Ohmygod im so glad you're back!!!! This story is really heating up and i would love to hear more of it!!!

So glad you've decided to continue this!! I can't wait to read more about Josh and Andrew as well as Jason and Matt!!

You write well - well enough that I hope the ending is the standard Lit cliche if he and Jason ending up together. I like these two together a lot.

I hope the ending ISN'T the standard cliched ending.

These two r so goin to be 2geda. If dats a cliched ending.... Yes pls i want more. I mean come on, its an effing love story and i want a HEA with a character i love, and one im coming to love. Cant wait for more hot sex from them😉

Andrew is an Ass

I hope you won't leave me hanging for too long I just know this is going to be good! :)

I stumbled upon this new story and was through the first couple of paragraphs before it dawned on me that this is a continuation of one of my favorite stories, Woodbridge Academy, with a focus on Josh. Excellent storytelling so far. I really look forward to reading this new tale as it unfolds. Please forget about the nastygrams you received during Woodbridge. In a perverse way, I suppose you should be flattered; they were so into the story that the cliffhanger unfortunately brought out their inner Trumps.

I officially hate you for making me so hooked to this story.

This story is love and needs to be updated ASAP

I'm literary dying to know what happens next

And Andrew is one sexy man

Love the josh focus!! Please update it's a amazing story!

How did I miss this story? Loved this story and Josh! Please update soon. :)

So good please do more soon :)

I didn't even realise the connection until I read the comments! This is great! So glad josh and Jason are friends again after all that crap Adam pulled

I have just finished chapter 1. I. am looking forward to 2 and 3.

I just want to live in this story. Fuckin' great read.

YAY!!! It IS Josh from the other story! And YAY Again because Jason and he made up!! And Pooh with how Andrew reacted!!! But I knew SOMETHING was gonna happen when he and Andrew bumped into one another just not how Andrew reacted that was a lil bit of a wow! Poor Josh... BUT since Jason and Matt got THEIR HEA I hope Josh and Andrew do as well!!! Im So Glad I found your stories!!! EXCELLENT!!!

I still hate him. You can’t just hurt your best friend/ crush like that and get back as if nothing really happened