All Comments on 'Product Tester Required Ch. 01-02'

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fanfarefanfareover 8 years ago
Mad Science runs amuck!

Good build-up with that Brit stiff-upper lip with a devilish twinkle in the author's eyes. The jokery deliberately building in waves of erotic humor. Culminating in a laugh-out-loud hanging of Cliff.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

A bit disjointed, but a lot of fun. Four stars for imagination.

TheDominantPartyTheDominantPartyover 8 years ago
A bit a all over the place

Its a bit all over the place, but I liked it!

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