All Comments on 'Professional Excellence Ch. 05'

After yesterday, starting off with this is just wrong. Pathetic and ridiculous characters in pathetic and ridiculous situations. Damn.

That must be a record, getting turned off a story before getting through the first line. 1*

another cocksucking wimp posting dumb cuck SHIT.

More like garbage. ONE STAR

If anybody should move to fetish it's you and take your shit stories with you. Have a nice day reading your normal shit stories and dream of sharing your wife with your neighbors to bring you home some cream pies for your enjoyment. Sick fuck.

Nothing more needs to be said.

this is a really good read. Hey annony you ASSWIPE go fuck yourself.

1* without reading it... ...why? because this writer posted the 4 previous parts in: "First Time", "Exhibitionist & Voyeur" (2) and "Group Sex", then post this part in LW! Does he expects that we will read the previous 4 parts? Really?

Within 1st paragraph with the mentioning about riding crop & thigh high boots couldn't read any further; prelude into knowing story is in wrong category. Wether it's BDSM, group, willing cuck or, other general fetish (and, yes, wife sharing is a fetish; usually conducted by less than a percentage of population); should be placed into a more appropriate category in order to get more accurate/appropriate ratings/reviews.

1*

Go fuck yourself bitch.You want to throw insults, two can play that game.

Gave it a ONE STAR.

And don't tell me it's Howard. If there's anyone or anything in this story worth reading it will take a really good literary detective to find it, maybe your carpul tunnel syndrome is a blessing to all of us.

This definitely doesn't stand alone. Who ARE these people? And why is this story in the LW section? Did you bother to re-read this or have someone proof read it for you? The story jumps around too much and is difficult to read. Try again. This was awful.

Good prose, classier writing than the usual stuff on Literotica. Don't listen to 'anonymous', he sounds like a troglodyte.

Not going to hunt the rest of the story across Lit. Don't change sites in midstrean.