by BJ_HoneyCut
That was hot. I'm gonna carry a quarter around now.
Anyway.
I hate the damn political correctness, though it adds to the story. I'm a good American and I say "fuck political correctness, go for honesty". But maybe that's just my messed-up mind uninhibited by social normalcies.
Good story. There should be an 'after', a 'next time' like the hitchhiker said.
Much better story than today's bookstore submission. It was inventive and held my interest. Although the storyline has limited scope, you attempted to fill out the character's lives.