by secretshy16
What a great story. What dreams are made of, a beautiful ebony lady.
This story was very hot and wishing for more. Keep up the good work,
that was absolutely delicious, and extremely well written. please post again soon. :)
as a black student who fantasizes about her white proffs frequently I really enjoyed reading this story. hot hot hot
YAy!! To your first submission. I really enjoyed this... Hope there's more to come
Good job on your first one.. I likes this story alot. I cant wait to read more from you!!
A lot of realism in this story. great descriptions. Keep writing u have talent
I'm so glad you didn't make Alyce out to be some dumb bimbo. Although she seems young, shes confident and srrong and sassy. She's a good match for rhe sexy professor. Please please please post a follow up chapter. Dont leave the story here!
This was a very nice and sweet story. Great job. I look forward to reading more from you.
After reading that I shall definitely have to take up a teaching career! Thanks for a story that just has loads of raw sex!
Love it! I really enjoyed how you explained what was going in Terry's mind. It made me laugh because he knows he's acting all giddy and crazy over this girl. But oh well, that's what you do when your in lust, well, in love in this case lol. This definitely needs an update so please don't leave us hanging!
I hope you turn this short story into a chapters long love story. I'm curious to know more about the development of Terry and Alyce's relationship. They already revealed that they were falling in love with each other.
Sincerely a fan,
STAR
Wow! Nice story nicely told. You have a talent for story telling.
I think this would fit in the "EC" or Romance sections instead of "IR."
A light proofreading could have caught the few typos I stumbled over but I don't think any real editing is needed because you really have a knack for story telling.
Thanks for sharing.
Really enjoyed it. What a fantasy love affair; THink I'll come back as a teacher next time. Great job!
i was happy reading till the "good genes" mixed crap came up.
I liked it. I wish we could have another chapter or two to see how their relationship progresses with her being his student and all.