All Comments on 'Professor's Temptation'

by BohemianEcstasy

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Rad'lRad'labout 19 years ago
More intro needed

Bo:

I'm not sure what this story needs - more background, more foreplay, sumpin'. Seems like sort of a one-minute-stand which could use more - on the two protagonists.

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