All Comments on 'Progressive Discipline Ch. 04'

This is one hot FUCKIN story my girlfriend enjoyed me reading it to her while she rode me. The intensity of the girl in the stories submission and punishment was amazing. The Master was very impressive and inspiring. My girlfriend was soooo turned on from your story that we had an amazing session of our own afterwards.

M & M

Glad you and your girl enjoyed it so much! As a writer, feedback is valuable to me. As an erotica writer, knowing that I got y'all so hot and bothered that you literally used my story DURING sex brings me great joy. I'll try to make sure I keep up the heat in future stories!

Overall, good story if perhaps just a bit too clinical. Not quite enough passion.