All Comments on 'Project Puppetmaster'

Ths is a very good begining. The possible areas to explore are unlimited. Please expand on this plot line as I am looking forward to see where you will take it.

With or without the sex this is a very interesting idea . I will be very interested to see where it goes . Keep up the good work .

please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i will be eagerly awaiting the next installments!!!

Woah! That was by far the best mind-control stories I've read! Kinda shaky on the transition from talking about sex to having it, but mindblowing climax! Keep up the good work! YOUR FANS DEMAND MORE!

That was a great story, written incredibly, and a potential awesome series. Keep it up.

Wow.. I can really see this turning into a great and hot series... keep it going please....

Puppet master was an awsome story. Please write more. I would love to find out what happens next. Does Barry fuck his mother and sister, or what?

Wow its very interesting and exciting, keep it up.

More please. Great story!

that's a story

i like the hypnosis idea. i really wanted him to fuck them or them to be naked. cant wait till next part comes out

I look forward to more of the story!

More more more

you should continue this into a series. haha. i enjoyed reading the story. keep it up.

enjoyed the story, but it would be a shame to end it now. so many ways to proceed with more adventures.

Loved it.. Would like to have seen him join in more actively.

make moar plz

Loved the story, waiting for the next part.

Good story. Well written.