All Comments on 'Prolonging the Inevitable'

I like your story so far, but I think you need an editor to help you with

the story flow.

Keep writing .

on your first submission to Lit. I like how you jumped in and set up a plot right off. It makes me eager for the next chapter to see what happens next. Again congrats on your first story and thanks for sharing.

Thanks for the feedback so far!!! :D

im glad i got u hooked for the next chapter ;)

will update chap 2 very soon!!!