All Comments on 'Prom Night'

This is one of those stories that i have been looking for. First time, sweet, romantic, sensual, and erotic all in one package. You did an awesome job bringing the reader into whichever character they chose. Beautiful.

Thanks!

your story was wonderful as far as it went, but you quit just when it got interesting.

Would his dad really be that encouraging...? but other than that..it was pretty good. Keep it up!

i swear he didnt even put the condom on?

good story, but bad grammar.

Lol the father character reminded me of that movie ... kinda cliché but it works.

awesome work but elaborate more

What a story man......For every Virgin this Story is what they have been looking for all throughout their life...Absoulutely Spectacular ....the way u described the emotions of Vince and Terra could only be described by a GENIUS....GREAT WORK DUDE KEEP IT UP my Blessings with u ....i think u didnt focus a lot on erotic part coz it would destroy the romance nd the sensousness of story right??....newayz GREAT WORK

It was good...except for 2 things: he didn't even put on the condom in the end (but whatever, she was on the pill and they were both virgins anyway), and the fact that he had a ponytail and earrings...I would never ever ever in my life sleep with a guy wearing a ponytail and earrings, but that's just me.

I am glad he didn't put the condom on even if she wasn't on the pill. Sometimes its nice to have at it the normal way.

This story was exactly what I was looking for! The sex was about the unconditional love and the romance of being together for 4 years. That's hard to find now in this day when all you have is sluts. I like this story because it relates very closely to me and my girlfriend. We are not in it for the sex but for the love, the sex will only make us stronger because we love each other. What Vince said in the limo and her reaction was great too! Bravo!

this story made me so happy. sometimes I wonder what it would have been like to lose my virginity in such a carefree way. for some people, the first time is dark and shameful, and as one of those, I can confidently tell you that you have no idea how lucky you are. I hope that when you remember the day you wrote about, you smile. after reading this, I have no doubt that you will. -hannah

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Mmmmm love fucking. And fuck her ass too