All Comments on 'Prom Problems'

too submissive ... the whole family is submissive ...

Very well done!

Let us know about the 2 week tryst after mom and dad leave, then make it where her brother and her blackmail each of the guys who forced them to fuck..but continue their fucking

need to let them get even with the assholes

The kids are adults now but still need a babysitter

get tumor

The warning about the NC activity was good, but I didn’t find it over the top. I hate that the mean kids got away with choreographed rape, but I love that the sister and brother found true passion in each other’s arms. Like they say, the best revenge is a well lived life!

Awesome story very enjoyable. Thanks for sharing!!!

...except for the bit where her mother has to tell her her brother's name: "Then why don't you just have your brother Jason escort you to prom?"

I enjoyed this story a lot! It seems to be well thought out and proof-read as well. It seems only the anonymous ones left negative comments. To heck with them. They are probably either jealous, don't like the genre, or both.

You put feelings to words and did so beautifully.

Thank You!

It was kinda sweet some parts but the rape felt shoehorned in...plus they got away with it which cheapened the read through. Unsatisfying

with her brother being a nerd and so good with computers. it would be great if you had them get revenge on all the pricks from the school and prom. including the one that slipped them the mickey.

Real good story that flowed well. But as in a lot of the stories here it needs another chapter.

Forced sex has never been my cuppa, but this story was pretty good. Thanks for sharing it.

needs another chapter

Great story. No need for anymore chapters. Near the end just could have added that brother/sister stole a few kisses and groped each other whilst in another room - or when no one was looking, until they were alone to fuck once again.

I AGREE WITH THIS: needs a 2nd part

with her brother being a nerd and so good with computers. it would be great if you had them get revenge on all the pricks from the school and prom. including the one that slipped them the mickey.

I fucking HATE bullies and abusers! Those bullies committed rape and should go to jail. It’s evil that they got away with it.

Oh… and I want the rest of the story!