All Comments on 'Promises'

by bluemoontease

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Not bad

But writing in the second person isn't really my thing. Thanks for the effort, though. 3*

bluemoonteasebluemoonteasealmost 8 years agoAuthor
Second Person Choice

This is for a partner of mine based on an experience of ours, hence the second person.

NalithNalithover 1 year ago

I like the second person style, though I prefer a more dominant woman. Still, I enjoyed it.

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