All Comments on 'Promises'

Such aa great story I loved it please make a sequel. Great writing

Such an erotic sensual story from a beautiful writer. More please

I kinda was thrown off at first by the shifting in POV....but by the 2nd page, things kinda fell into a groove. Def a good start, but just my opinion here, I think you could have tried to evoke more connotative feeling from the situation rather than just expressive vocabulary. But some folks dig it one way, others do not....kinda like anal, lol

Nice build up, like the mystery.

I liked it... the switch in poverty threwme off some but I got onto it... maybe put the next ones from the subs pov... I like the little things like the phone call, the way she can tell her Sir from Mark, those things make it real... keep it up... maybe she should get into trouble next time... everyone makes mistakes...