All Comments on 'Promises'

I really enjoyed this story and I can't wait to read what happens next for Rad and Chaz, I really enjoyed the twist it made me laugh and I will be smiling about that all day. Thanks :)

Make sure your characters (and, if at all possible, you) have lots of sex! I studied a lot and fucked a lot during those long-ago horny years, yet was extremely successful in my studies - being happy and satisfied raises efficiency.

I loved it, keep writing Hun !

I knew they had to know each other already. Please keep this story going

Your story varies back and forth between past and present tense, sometimes in mid sentence. It's very distracting. Give some thought to having someone beta your stories before you post them.