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Click hereIt was right then, as his newly initiated slave began to explode all over his big hard dick that Michael took the large pink dildo and with all his might drove it straight into his sister's ass.
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Michael stood in front of his locker and watched as Brittany entered the hallway. Her eyes were lowered in concentration and she walked slowly, doing her utmost to look normal and relaxed in spite of the thick 9-inch phallus she held up her backside on his order. Michael smiled at his former sibling and even had to suppress a laugh at what he had made of the dumb cock-craving slut. His mighty manhood stirred in his pants and he turned back to his locker before he let the whole school know his not-so-little secret. He glanced back toward his sister and saw Suzanne a few paces behind her. She moved straight to her locker, apparently not yet noticing Brittany. Michael watched with keen interest as Suzanne pulled the envelope he'd left for her off the locker door. A few seconds later, Suzanne ran out of the building clutching a picture in her hand.
When Michael sat down in History class that morning Mr Knowles couldn't help noticing how strange it was to see Michael Ellery, smiling.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 8 years agowas (-with) seated
focussed (focused)
Gym (gym)
kids (-were) stood around
day at High school (high)
History class (history)
none the less (nonetheless)
The Bitch (the bitch)
fool proof (foolproof)
sluty (slutty)
along side (alongside)
slowed it's pounding (its)
their goodbye's (goodbyes)
cry's of their exertion (cries)
whores tight (whore’s)
her and her friends (-had) drank (she)
low-life (lowlife)
photo's (photos)
laying asleep (lying)
crest fallen (crestfallen)
down stairs (downstairs)
shoe-box (shoebox)
dildo's (dildoes)
off course there'll be the fallout (of)
fight him any more (anymore)
Marks meat (Mark’s)
mark (Mark)
weren't such pro's (pros)
re-living (reliving)
re-asserted (reasserted)
awe-struck (awestruck)
new masters (master’s)
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Anonymousover 10 years agowaste of time and space, big dicks= turn off, piss poor writing = turn off, unrealistic story= turn off. no guy twin or not would ever want anything to do with a bitch like her, he would find a way to ignore and avoid her at all costs going as far as to move away. this isn't the twilight zone so stop with the unbelievable garbage.
C_frommnover 10 years agoYou need to follow-up on this story and let us know how Tyrone and Suzanne end up. and does Michael get his Dream Girl and keep her and his Sister as Slaves.
Anonymousabout 12 years agoThis is great work man. I am surprised this is under mind control and not under bdsm. Not complaining or anything. In fact, I liked the fact that he turned is sister into a cockaholic. And the pictures on the locker...priceless!!! You need to add Suzanne into the mix sometime....maybe her apologizing after seeing those pictures of Tyrone (sans his sister's face) porking some white trash ho.
Anonymousover 15 years agoSay it ain't so YAWNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN.
Anonymousabout 16 years ago... how this bitch of a sister treats her twin-brother. She had it coming all the way along. The grammar wasn't as bad as some of the former comments may say, but I'm from germany, so I could be wrong. But the story might be the greates I ever read on literotica. The scene with him daydreaming in hystery class and his sister telling sue was great in its cruelty. After about 2 minutes of reading I started hating his sister. I hoped somehow that he could get her back in the worst way ever and that he actually fucked her and still got a picture make the round in school was just the right treatment she deserved... for the beginning. Please write more! I want to see this bitch be tormented for every little second she was cruel to her brother. Keep it on , for god's sake!^^
This may be a long comment, but the story was just great and had to write what I think of it *g*
Anonymousabout 17 years agoGreat story! Good revenge but not too inhuman, dunno what else to say, just great job I hope there's more, I'm about to check but if not please write more!!
David48over 18 years ago...is a dish best served c-o-l-d. Ok so what I'm a trekkie. This is soooo good. Really hot and really well written.
Anonymousalmost 19 years agoGood job building the suspense of how he was going to receive justice for his sister's terrible cruelty. Can't wait to read more! In this case the huge cock was not a case of "huge-cock-itis" but poetic justice.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoNormally, when I read the story and the main character has a huge penis, I hate it. But, this time, it just feels right for some reason. It feels right that after having his sister call him half a man and saying that he was meant to be a girl twin that he just have this monster dong.
*shrugs* that's just my two cents though.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoI too, agree with the first comment. But, it is still very good and well written. Would like to see more of the story, see the plot/characters worked out a little more.
The BIG dick was unexpected, and unnecessary. Probably would have been stronger if the sister was subjugated by a brother with a normal (or less) size dick. That would have made the brother's domination of her even more compelling.
But on the whole, very good.
Thanks.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoi agree with the first comment, the grammar needs some polishing....but the story itself was fantastic.
Anonymousabout 19 years agoYou need to do some proof reading to fix some grammatical errors and to fix some errors in continuity but all that aside, it was a great story. You need to finish it. I don't think she got what she deserved. >:)
