All Comments on 'Promises Pt. 01'

Good set up.

Awaiting the next chapter

This is a really great start. As I see it, the way you describe Peter, his thoughts, actions, emotions and secret fears is entirely consistent with what I would want and expect to see. I my be projecting way too early, but if you are going to take through his discovery of who he really is, including who he is in a relationship, and his acceptance of that, then I believe we are in for a treat. Glad it is all written. Go a head and post the rest!!

I am looking forward to reading the next chapter. Thanks

Great setup to this story. Looking forward to following parts.

This is almost too good for this platform's standards, but who am I to complain? The only part I fast forwarded so far was the sex scene with Destinee. I can't stand her (or the man Peter becomes when he's with her), and looks never mattered to me, so I let my own autistic nature have its way and ignore the fake fucking. Gosh, I'm glad she's. Looking forward to reading how Peter learns to accept being the way he is. I'd pick a geek over a prick anytime. I won't read this for the sex, I'll read it for the outstanding writing and the interesting characters.

Great start. I may have read this story before but I'm happy to do so again.

I had hit a pause in my Literotica browsing, and started a pilgrimage to catch up with authors I had marked out as favorites. I've plainly hit the jackpot with Michael Butterfield. ////

What a magnificent opening installment! What a complex fascinating character is Peter Malakhof! ////

I'm looking forward to a marvelous ride.

"The expanse" by SA Corey, is the top of my sci-fi list .

I'm coming to the party late I dislike waiting and forgetting to see the next chapter post. That was a fast relationship with a phony Destine. So many awkward social situations to take to Mexico. You get great comments