All Comments on 'Promising Danielle Ch. 03'

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PennLadyPennLadyalmost 14 years ago
Lovely

Nice job. Not sure more is needed, but I won't object. :)

photographerphotographeralmost 14 years ago
Just as I thought

The young lady in my life went through similar trauma. You wrote well concerning what Danielle went through. My young lady also considered the whole sordid thing to be her fault and it took a lot of work to convince her otherwise.

Stories like this are needed to educate the readers to the fact that this sort of thing occurs - more frequently than is realised, and causes terrible psychological damage.

Keep writing - you're doing a great job.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
More!

Great story...let the love grow. don't cheapen it with sordid random couplings. Those aren't always necessary

wjthermanwjthermanalmost 14 years ago
Fantastic!

You're doing a fantastic job! Keep it up!

catman71catman71almost 14 years ago
results

know that they have each other, the confronting of her family, or more to the point, what happens after she finds a balance is what i hope for next, things like this do not "heal" without some closure one way another, and as another peson wrote, i have expierence with a situation like this( not as a loved one , but as a friend that found out)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Extraordinary

Very moving love story. You write well, keeping the reader

engaged. Please continue to share your gift with us

AzPilotAzPilotalmost 14 years ago
A very well done story.

Thank you for an intertaining interlude.

mariasmdmariasmdalmost 14 years ago
ah

i know this is a work of fiction but, her family are seriously disturbed for what they did to her. so great that she is able to live still.

inka2222inka222211 months ago

1 star. The story was mostly good but I'm so sick and tired of this garbage "oh she is sooooo beautiful" stories. Because of course only a beautiful girl/woman deserves to have someone be there for her. The author is so fucking shallow :(

AnonymousAnonymous29 days ago

Touching! 5*

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