All Comments on 'Proposition'

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GybbsGybbsabout 6 years ago
i guess i'm luckier than i thought

At first I was feeling a little sorry for myself, since NOBODY had EVER offered me ANYTHING to get naked for them LOL ... but given the outcum here, maybe that's just as well. Meanwhile, where can I meat that 6'6" stud?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Discomfoting But Hot

Hot story. I am glad he was properly fucked by a stud, but I am uneasy about the manipulation. I would feel better if he actually realizes the opportunities that await (he did thoroughly enjoy the fuck) and fully takes advantage of them for his own pleasure. Then he can turn the table on the creep. That is how I would like to see it, but it is your story, so who knows. I will enjoy the tension whatever turn you take. Good writing.

PG564EPG564Eabout 6 years ago
Extremely exciting story

Well plotted, well written - screams for a part Two (or three?)

Your descriptions of a man being fucked are superb. Your writing left me hard, naked, with two fingers up my anus. . . very grateful to you!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

This guy is going to love being fucked more than he likes fucking Gloria.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Great

OMG.. Totally loved this story.

divergurldivergurlabout 6 years ago
So good please give us more

This story was great and original. Good plot and story build up. Please tell me there is more more more and longer. Can't wait to see when Gloria finds out and his next time with the little man

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Anonymous

Holy shit. This is the hottest story on this site.

RustyRoverRustyRoverabout 6 years ago
Great Story

Total Turn On! Can't wait for Part 2. Please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
PART 2

Can't wait to see hin getting blackmailed, please post a 2nd part soon

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 6 years ago
Agree with comment re: Gloria

He’s going to love getting fucked by this stud... fucking his girlfriend Gloria will never seem as good. Cock is the greatest!

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Fantastic

Wow cant wait for part 2

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Let there be more!

Loved it. Small, bossy much older men have a way of turning me into a submissive, begging slut. Perfect story!

joeywhorejoeywhoreabout 5 years ago

Looking forward to more wondering if he will prostitute James out now that he fucked him and had another guy fuck him!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Hot!

I really enjoyed the story up until the switcheroo. lo

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