All Comments on 'Protect and Serve'

Very unrealistic. This seems to be just short of a rape. The woman might act like she did while under stress, but you can bet his ass would be reported and the department would have a court summons next morning. The idea she would still obey him once away from his immediate power requires a suspension of belief that is beyond my abilities. However, I see you got a pretty good score so others don't have my problems with this story. GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR WRITING.

I loved it!! PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE write more!!

Craps me up when people push reality into what is obviously a fantasy/erotic story. If you want real life, there are plenty of sites to go to. Well done.

I think your story is well written. I think a lot of women fantasize about being taken away mentally and sexually. I am an ocean lover and liked your descriptions of the salty air, cool breezes and starry night.