All Comments on 'Proud Holders Ch. 01'

Though the premise of this story is pretty unlikely, I found all the chapters a good smooth read. Actually, I enjoy unlikely or even ridiculous stories that bring up primal and deep emotions. If you are looking for hot sex, this series is not for you, But if you find that the struggle for controlling one's bladder in desperate circumstances is charged, then this depicts that well. I think the device of propelling the story through dialog works well. 5-stars.