All Comments on 'Providing Service'

hey! It wasn't that the story was so erotic or anything that I gave it such a high mark. I didn't get much excited or anything. It was just a good read, well narrated.

I sure enjoyed your tale. At long last a writer who describes a young senior citizen with a real look to life, No perky tits or flat stomach "from working out". Floppy tits and love handles with a belly roll thats what you get at my age. Those are the things I have gotten to enjoy as life creeps up on us. I did not check your profile but with a 1950 A possible baby boomer. Thanks for a good tale. I sure will read more of your work

Terrific story! It's a fantasy...but it creates its own reality and doesn't come across as outlandishly unrealistic as so many of these stories do.

I'm sorry, but no matter how well written grammatically or 'true to life', if the story doesn't turn the reader on, it has missed its mark. Stories on this site are meant to be erotic; this is a fantasy site.

Well, folks. I have no direct knowledge of 10-inch love poles, women with washboard abs or perky tits. I love women of all sizes and shapes, can see sexual pleasure in most all of them who are interested and reciprocate. I have always preferred older women, nice tits - natural hangers, not enhanced.

I write about what I'm familiar with and like, and who's to say fantasies can't look like that?

Readers who prefer more fanciful prose are welcome to read my stories if they desire or not read them. That's why, I guess, there's a wide variety of authors, story types and styles available.

Thank you to all for your comments, positive and not so positive.

Hut

I think you've got a good potential series, with the

sexual adventures of young hut. Let's see what happens next.

Like some more encounters with his aunt and mother. Maybe

a 3some with them both, or some other women. The aunt &

mother might have some older female friends who are

also lonely widowers or divorced and could use some

regular servicing from the a young man.

But also there's a missing story here. We should also

read about Hut and his sisters and cousin. In the fist story, he mentioned having mutual masturbation sessions with them, and in this one, he's already has sex with them. So

how about writing a story set inbetween these two,

where we see about how that started? I'd assume that

after getting real sex from Rose he was no longer

satisfied with just masturbating with his sisters and

cousin, and convinced them to go all the way as well.

I'd like to read that.

I think you've got a good potential series, with the

sexual adventures of young hut. Let's see what happens next.

Like some more encounters with his aunt and mother. Maybe

a 3some with them both, or some other women. The aunt &

mother might have some older female friends who are

also lonely widowers or divorced and could use some

regular servicing from the a young man.

But also there's a missing story here. We should also

read about Hut and his sisters and cousin. In the fist story, he mentioned having mutual masturbation sessions with them, and in this one, he's already has sex with them. So

how about writing a story set inbetween these two,

where we see about how that started? I'd assume that

after getting real sex from Rose he was no longer

satisfied with just masturbating with his sisters and

cousin, and convinced them to go all the way as well.

I'd like to read that.

I think you've got a good potential series, with the

sexual adventures of young hut. Let's see what happens next.

Like some more encounters with his aunt and mother. Maybe

a 3some with them both, or some other women. The aunt &

mother might have some older female friends who are

also lonely widowers or divorced and could use some

regular servicing from the a young man.

But also there's a missing story here. We should also

read about Hut and his sisters and cousin. In the fist story, he mentioned having mutual masturbation sessions with them, and in this one, he's already has sex with them. So

how about writing a story set inbetween these two,

where we see about how that started? I'd assume that

after getting real sex from Rose he was no longer

satisfied with just masturbating with his sisters and

cousin, and convinced them to go all the way as well.

I'd like to read that.

Sorry about the multiple posting last time. I pressed

submit and nothing seemed to happen. So pressed it a

couple of times, then it finally showed up like that.

Great story. Mother-fucking is the best.I especially like the way he pushed his cock into his mother as far as it would go while he squirted. Delightful. The world needs more of this.

great story... love to read about Sons bringing their Mother to thigh quivering orgasms

i got my moms sister preg. my aunt little whore

This is an outstanding story of a tall strapping young man, Hutter, Hut for short, who provides excellent service for all the cunts of the family. The very fit 20 year old regularly fucks his two sisters and his cousin. But he's equally attentive to the older family twats, his aunt's and most especially his own mother's. The females are wild for what Hut's got swinging between his strong young legs, and the amiable family fucker is always willing to share his fat stiff prick with them. All of them, his sisters, cousin, auntie, and mom love the good-looking boy's big very hard dick and the endless supply of rich creamy semen Hut's got sloshing around in those big loaded balls of his. Hut gives them the best fuck of their lives, unloading his balls in one family twat after the other. It's just the accepted practice in this family that Hut bends one or another of the females over the kitchen table, or holds her up against the wall, or climbs on top of her in bed, and shoves his sturdy young cock up between her legs till he floods her twat with his potent young sperm. How long before the place is swarming with cute little Huts and Hutettes, all from Hut's brimming balls?

I come back again and again to read this great story. Hut's so fucken cool, a real Alpha guy! He sure "provides service"---by servicing the cunts of the family with his big stiff prick. Hut's got a big pair of balls that never quit, filled with the rich creamy semen that's so soothing to his momma's twat. He's a model to all boys---they all ache to shove their young dick up their mother's twat. Nowadays more and more sons are doing just that. Moms love them for it, their boy's dick is the stiffest there is and his young balls keep on producing the heavy cream that melts a mother's heart and fills her motherly cunt. Boys creaming the same cunt they came out of---so beautiful it brings tears to your eyes.

I enjoyed your story. Thanks for posting it. May I suggest that before posting stories you record yourself reading them. You’ll hear what isn’t working. The run-on sentences were very distracting.