All Comments on 'Proxy Tales #01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Great story and welcome to Literotica!

I love this tale, especially the dirty talking bits which give it a really nice punch. It's very well written and whoever your female role models may be (even if they only come from the wellspring of your imagination), I just love the way all the pieces fit together from beginning to end. I'm looking forward to #02, #03, #04, etc. Keep up the good work!

amsterdamamsterdamalmost 14 years ago
Great!

Being a fan of MIL stories I was pleased that this wasn't the usual 'paint by numbers' effort and actually had some character depth, a believable plot and a great ending. Well done!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I am Impressed!

You are definitely one of the best writers on this site.

Your stories are wonderfully real and passionate and sexy and hot and lustful at the same time. WEll done!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
please next

please next chapter son in law come back fuck her mother in law

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago

well done i must say.....

clive_iluvnycclive_iluvnycover 9 years ago
Hot, arousing, and inventive

Great idea and execution of this story. Thanx. More please.

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