All Comments on 'Public Service: Sasha'

I liked your story. It was fresh and original. There were a handful if grammatical issues, but a good editor can help with that. Keep writing!

That was great. Please write more !

I loved your story, and I absolutely adored this world you created. I'd love to read and learn more about it. I also enjoyed that, even though this a new, different world, it was simple to keep up and not be bombarded with too much details that would take away from the focus of the story. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more from you! ;)