All Comments on 'Public Transportation Ch. 01'

by TheAutumnComes

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Great start

Loved the premise and great start but please watch the typos...somewhat distracting. Not criticizing, just sayin, lol! Hope this is a nice long tale with a happy ending because it sure seems like he could use one, bless his heart! T.

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