All Comments on 'Public Transportation Ch. 02'

Nice work! Could you please continue? I can't wait!

Don't stop now. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

This chapter started off kinda rocky, but quickly got much better. You have my interest and I await the next chapters. congratulations, you are in my favorites to check daily for updates.

No really, its getting really good.

Keep them coming...

Hi,

Love your story.

Please post the rest. Been waiting for a long time.

Thanks

Rod

How is it that the author thinks this is a romanticly erotic story? This story belongs no where.

More Please!

What happened? Where did you go? Hope you're okay. Please continue. Okay so now they both could use a happy ending, but I guess if you don't continue...

T.

This started as a good story, lots of potential. Too bad you never got around to finishing it. I know you probably never got any feed back and decided not to continue. I just hope you started to write under another name.