All Comments on 'Punished After Prom'

I'm not usually into the non-consent incest stories, but it has been a slow and horny day so I thought I'd try one.

GLAD I DID!

Daddy

Great story, good start to your writing endeavors.

good start on the first of your stories now you can open up the scope of the new story. as i am shore there will be many more great writing

This was a very nice story, would love to read the second chapter soon.

Daddydoesher

If she's eighteen and not home schooled, there's a large possibility she knows what a cock is and knows about sex and probably has had it, especially if she had a date with the best football player, try and make her sound not so naive, but overall, it was a good story, your writing style is good and the plot is sound, good luck!

i liked it! i agree there should be more chapters. :)

oh daddy that was HOT i wish my daddy would take me like that i look foward to spankings because of this shit ima bad girl oh fuck this made me come soooo much

This story made my pussy soooo wet

i was punished after prom but no like this i wish my daddy would have done that . i'm so wet right now that i had to fuck my didlo !!

You are kidding, aren't you? His 'pee pee'????? Geezzzzzz

okayyy, sure it was hot but maybe a little innocent.

anyway ur a good writer. well done

You aren't serious?

Daddy was so bad and naughty this morning, and then he had too many beers with lunch and fell asleep on the sofa! Naughty naughty! And look at this pee-pee, all dirty from being naughty this morning. Well we'll just have to cut it off with the ole butcher knife here and send it out to be dry-cleaned! Wow, daddy must have had a LOT of beer, he didn't even wake up! ...and he's being naughty again, look at all that blood he's getting all over the sofa and floor! I'll never get that all out!

The hymen is not located inside the vagina and plus not having a hymen doesnt mean you're not a virgin. The hymen can tear because of stretching or fingering roughly. Learn about the females body, you fucking idiot.

nice

She was 18y old. You made her sound like she was about 7 or 8 years old!

fuck me daddy, please.

Loved it. I think it's funny when ppl "critique" these stories & get so angry about it. This is hot & wld love to read more from you. I'm a daddy's girl too & love the way you think. <3