by narendn
This is perhaps the biggest ton of shit I have ever read in my life. Someone should tie this author up and perform some of these so called rituals on them. Issues man. Big issues. Where is all of the action. This is not incest this is s and m.
A wonderful piece of erotic literature... Thanks for posting it for us all to enjoy...
this story is sick and twisted the author obviously has issue, you need help...seriously
that was scary, and hard to read. i no longer want sex. i want to have sex with your son to make him feel better about the evil things you do to him.
well written. it seems some readers have "issues" (to include spelling issues).
The biggest piece of fuckin shit read ever in my entire life. It's not incest, it's torture...Pity the son. The author needs to wake her freakin idea up guys...I wasted 5 mins of my time...!
So disgusting and so not erotic that i didnt even finish it...just a waste of time.
I plan to leave no room for comment by those who usually slam people like myself who find a particular story unappealing. This story should be in the BDSM section from what I read. It scared me. If for some reason this is a true story and not just fantasy, it is wrong and your son really needs help...And you need to be put in an asylum. There were also some spelling errors. My main thing however is the story itself. Spelling and grammar in the story were fairly good but there were a few as noted just above.
this is fiction. it's written from an ironic perspective. Don't try to censor the author's thoughts. I've read much more perverse works on this site, anyway.
I thought it was good. maybe I'm just a perv.
I heard of this story from my cousin. While reading, it seemed evident that there would be no holding back. I respect that and read it with an open mind.However, if you have to be extreme, why not give it the proverbial "kitchen sink" instead of trying to moderate certain parts.Spelling is another worry. On the whole, a good effort for a beginner. Hope to see more of you.
One messed up motherfucker. You are sick, that is disgusting, anyone that finds this shit erotic enough to post should be institutionalized and then put in the electric chair.
This is the sorriest story I have read on here and I think I have read about all of them.
Lady you are one sick woman.
personally i liked. I thought it was an interesting story involving many aspects that i personally find erotic. As to the comments that have been left on this page, i find it incredible that people seem to think this is a true story. Perhaps i am naive in thinking that it isn't. The other thing that astounds me, is that people seem more willing to accept incest, than bdsm. this IS an incest story, given the relationship between mother and son, however torturous it may be.
is anybody ever monitoring this shit? most crappy story ever read on literotica! plz do the readers a favor n take this shit out. better still, keep that moron of a writer out of ur site. thx
please stop this from being on our site
if in future you bring up a section for torture or nonsense please move this one there...
That was truly one of the worst stories I have ever read on this site...please no more like this
I think your spelling is horrible, but i also believe u may have something in the future with incest/bdsm. The pissing on the face was a bit much. But i got a good laugh out of it.
And to the guy that said it wasted 5 minutes of his time, it wasted 10 of mine.
This is just down right disgusting, real or not. I hope the website would get some content censor-ers to block horrific stories like this one out.
Most crappy story i had come across. Its certainly far far from truth, and if its even half the truth . i feel sorry for both the characters
It was just superb.I am flat.Specially the armpit licking was very good.Would very much like to read a simillar story.plz contact me if u hav time.I am 21 male my id is sheela_sharma4me@yahoo.com.waiting u............
who ever wrote this gay story must be retarded. i mean seriously screwed up in the head.
what the fuck have you written!!!!
it is the ugliest piece of shit i have ever seen in my life!!!!
i mean wtf .
if your thoughts are so ugly (erotically) then what must you be thinking of people in real?
i couldnt shag for three weeks after reading the first 10 lines.
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This is a great story, all of it ! Stories are indeed for what you don't do in real life. And sorry for the piss midgets who did not like it...;-)
The perfect blend of s&m, psychology and incest make this story SOO SEXY... I read it like three years ago, FINALLY found it again!! YAAY
I really expected more of this story it was sick and should be reported on how sick you sound. You need extreme help. This is sick delete it!!!
Very nice and hot story where the mother has got her son of the Girls - except herself.
Maybe Another chapter when she is rewarding sonny with intercourse?
from what i managed to get from the story, this one sick unattracticve woman who is showering in the affections of her small dicked son while making him feel inadequate for other women, her fucking ugly self included. She is feeding her once irrelevant ego by humiliating her son like she was once(most probably) humiliated.
Poor presentation overall man. Probably, one of the Sickest fucking shit on this site
writing could use some fixing up, but you really know how to write a good humiliation story. I've come back to this story frequently over the years whenever I've wanted something really miserable and sick to get off to.