All Comments on 'Punishment'

beautiful story, Z ~ in every way. Please keep writing such wonderful art!

If you dont like a story even though you are warned.Then you render an honest opinion and it is not complimentary to the story. You come back to see if its only your opinion that is lousy. Your submission has been removed and there is still just one reply. Which is complimentary. This stinks. DO YOU WANT OPINIONS OR NOT? Lousy Story GOOD DAY

Liked the literary touches, and I would have liked the rest if it had felt more credible.