by qualite
Wrong fucking category! There is no ROMANCE! being stoned is not even remotely erotic let alone romantic! Post your shit where it BELONGS!
At first glance I tend to agree with the anonymous poster - as it stands this story probably belongs in a different category. However, you've planted some seeds that could make this the first installment of something more - I'm hopeful that that you have more to tell us about these people.
Sorry if this wasn't the best place to put it. When I finished it I just wasn't sure which category was the best. Does anyone know how to move stories to different categories? Or would I just have to delete it and resubmit somewhere else? Also, which category would be more suitable?
Sorry, I'm pretty new at this.
I saw the romance in it. It was mostly nonverbal intuitive. And yes, this if you kept seeing her would be a good start for more short installments.
P.S. it sounded like you were at the right place at the right time. Oh and the ending was awesome, gave me a good laugh