All Comments on 'Pup Ch. 06'

by HyakinthosTheoi

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mislaidthoughtsmislaidthoughtsabout 6 years ago
This story is right up my alley

Hot sex, and feelings? My favorite kind of erotic fiction. I'm really enjoying this story and I I like how Gavin's feelings come through even though Matt doesn't fully recognize them for what they are.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
awesome story... as always

Love ❤ every part of this story cause is very relatable.

I can see me in Matt and I can see my boyfriend in Gavin.

I'll love to see what happens next

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago
Can’t wait for more

Just discovered this story and can’t wait for the next chapter! It’s absolutely beautiful <3

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

noooo! it cant end like this - ive loved this story for a while but hadnt finished until just now. its so perfect and there are so many parallels i can draw between this story and my partner and i. truly lovely writing, keep it up!

NymzanSusaurenNymzanSusaurenabout 5 years ago
Mistake

Hmm...Gavin HAD to know how much he was falling for him before he left. He has had other lovers. The kid has not. Not a mistake. He knew. He left. Make him work for, I say...No one likes being 'just another fuck' to anyone. It is good to be remembered.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Amazing

Great story! I came over from your other writing and fell in love with this story line❣

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I write erotica that brings me pleasure, and enjoy sharing my work. Comments and feedback are greatly appreciated. It's been a long time since I wrote it but I am still working on drafting Pup into a graphic novel or maybe a book. All updates will be posted here.

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