All Comments on 'Puppet Master & the Hooters Girl'

Good story. Well written and who doesn't like bosomy brunettes? Since you asked how about spicing those chicken wings up just a little bit. Make the babes married, engaged or at least having a steady boyfriend. A little reluctance on the woman's part is always nice in the fantasy world of Lit. Thanks for writing.

but amateurish. Try to be more sophisticated in your writing.

felt like the same story, some paragraphs were copied word for word.

Change more than the looks of the girl. Maybe one is a complete submissive (without inhibitions) or a bossy dom who demands what has been "implanted" in her head.

Well written.