by Nirkal
I like this story. I am not sure what show or book etc this based on. There is a few thing that were hard to understand or see the picture you were painting. So far I believe I have understood. looking forward to the next chapter.
this is such a great story and im sad i didnt find it sooner so i could reread it over and over....i still will but it would have been nice to know earlier! i love the characters and can't wait for the next chapter! your a great writer and i hope you continue to write! :D