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Click hereShe climbed into the shower and scrubbed herself vigoursly, trying to wash away the uneasiness. She stomped around the house, irrationally angry at everything. Racking her brain, Ally couldn't think of anything that would have made her feel this way. Looking closely at the calendar she realised that she was probably just feeling some PMS.
Putting on her Mp3 player, she turned up her favourite tunes as she marched into the backyard armed with gloves and pruning shears. She spent the morning weeding, hedging and mulching her yard. It was soothing, and she felt herself relaxing as she focused on the task. When the sun was high overhead, she wiped her heavy brow and made her way into the cool confines of the kitchen. Taking out the ear phones, she helped herself to a cool glass of water.
On her way to take a shower she noticed her answering machine was flashing. She pressed play, listening to the masculine voice she had missed for the last few days.
"Hi Ally, it's Zac. How are you? I know you wanted some space, but I was wondering; did you want to meet for a coffee? We need to talk."
- COMMENTS
Shadowsungalmost 12 years agoAuthorJust Submitted Chapter TEN!
Had to go the long way, so it will take some time.
Email me with a reply address and I will email you a teaser section
<3 Shadowsung
Anonymousabout 12 years agoi think this story is awesome and there is nothing that needs to be changed it is good the way it is please update soon : )
kitteh_katabout 12 years agowhy people ask how you are on an answering machine.
like i'm really going to reply to a phone.
carry on though, i want to know A LOT more...
p.s. i'm just sayin' but i think Ally's stressin' just a little to much on the whole blowjob thang.
I mean it's not like he fucked the girl!
right?
k_k
Nchantaabout 12 years agoI keep imagining the voice of the horrible evil person to be that of Gargamel from the Smurfs. He just sounds so Gargamel-ish hehe
Hope that you keep going with this, it's looking like a keeper :)
Nchy
Squirt65about 12 years agoI just discovered this story yesterday and I am Hooked!!! I look forward to the rest of the story... I hope You feel better soon.... Best Wishes....
celesteyabout 12 years agoTo all of you that have anything negative to say.... Piss off! I love this story and a wolfs tail. I am willing to wait for the greatness instead off something that is forced. Shadowsung you keep doing what you do and I will keep enjoying you written works. To everyone else..... Piss off!
kitteh_katover 12 years ago(no doubt im going to sound like a child, but...) please can you make the story better? (just imagine that said in a gummy six year old voice... lol) i don't like a bad ending and i want it all sorted out!!!
please?!?!
k_k
