All Comments on 'Puritan Whores Ch. 04'

I certainly hope not. I think you still have a lot of mileage left here. Please give us more. And keep posting on storiesonline too.

This is just getting better and better but please don't lose track of all the Girls, to many names and woman will make it hard to remember who is who. But awesome new Chapter love this series

DAMN, COULD YOU IMAGINE LIVING THIS OUT, lol I HAVE TO TELL YOU THIS STORY IS SO FUCKING MUCH BETTER LISTENING WITH JENNIFER'S VOICE IN MY TEXT READER "TEXTALOUD". DAMN JENNIFER KNOWS JUST WHEN TO EMPHASIZE A WORD, A MOMENT, MAKING THE FANTASY SO MUCH BETTER. THANX SATINSLIP!

probably will be my last - I typically don't read past 3 chapters.

It's been a fun ride though.

You've produced better chapters. Editing and formatting where your scenes flow instead of abruptly change without warning goes a long way. You introduce almost a dozen new people but only detail two at most is pointless. Strangely and unnecessarily add that the started screwing black males out if left field. Randomly including interracial is a feeble story devise. Not to mention the poorly thought out orgy convention weekend. You've barely introduced these women and now they're into orgies. Highly unlikely, lazy, and proves to the reader you've ran out of ideas. The playground was lame enough now you've concocted an even bigger bore of an unrealistic convention weekend. You started strong and have gone downhill quickly. Very disappointing.

Meek, pious women finding what they want and grabbing it.