All Comments on 'Pursuit of Happiness 03'

just a little bit of advice might want to make some kind of mark when u are in a different place

was a good chapter i hope she gets pregnant this time looking forward to your next chapter

i hope that she would get pregnant now... it would be so sad if she couldn't have pups with the man that she loves

This steady pace of chapters is wonderful. The whole storyline of Lyssa being in estrus was entertaining. I love the fact that even though she was going crazy, she still managed to use the tools. Since you have set this pace of posting so often, I will expect nothing less. hehe-he. Thank for another great chapter.

good chAPTER,

I don't think lyssa should get pregnant yet. It's soon. I can't imagine where the story line would go if that were the case, but i'm not a writer. I think right now, her abilities should take precedent.

also, thank you for a great chapter and for updating so soon.

The flow of words is stilted and choppy. It is like something you would find in a dick and jane book. Very hard to read.

I really liked Animal lover, but this story is leaving me a bit frustrated as it seems that you've submitted your outline, not the completed chapters.